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"Revolutions of My Mind" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 27/12/2016
Now ....
When I Write Rhymes ...
I Think You'll Find ...
That They're ...
Best Defined ...
As .....
" Revolutions of My Mind " ...
A Definition ... Befitting ...
of My Written Inscriptions ...
Descriptive Depictions ...
of ... Human Existence ...
Killings By ... “ VILLAINS “ ...
Whose Visions Are Driven ...
By ... Levels of Thinking ...
LOCKED IN ...
... "Mental PRISONS" ... !!!
Mind States ... Revolting ...
In Ways .... SO REVOLTING ..... !!!!!
That Their ... Revolutions ...
Are CLEARLY ... POLLUTED ...
And NEEDING ... IMPROVEMENTS ...
In Terms of ... Their Movements ... !!!!
It Seems They NEED Tutors ...
To Give Them Solutions ...
To Their Revolutions ...
Those ... LESS Evolved ... !!!
Than Those That Revolve ...
In Ways That ... DISPLAY ...
Usage ... of The Brain ...
That Helps To ... EASE Pain ... !!!
So That ... REVOLUTIONS ...
RETIRE ... Confusion ... !!!
Inside of THE MIND ... !!!!!
A Place That I Find ...
When Writing These Rhymes ...
That ...
Keep Me INSPIRED ...
When ... Mentally Tired ...
Revolutions ... REQUIRED ... !!!!!
That Have NO Gunfire ... !!!
Or ... NEED For Barbed Wire ...
To Fight The Empire !!!! ...
Just THINKING That's ... HIGHER ...
Than Those Who ... "Conspire" ...
Because They Are .... LIARS .... !!!!!
" Revolutions of My Mind " ...
Are Those ...
WELL Designed ... !!!
In ... Poetic Lines ....
of Verse I Now Write ...
Selective .... Impressive ...
And FAR From ............... Defective .............. !!!!
Collected ... Inspected ...
And YES .... Fuel Injected .... !!!!!
Because Their Directives ...
Have THOUGHTS As The Fuel ...
They ... CONTINUALLY Use ... !!!!!
A Fuel ... WELL PROTECTED ... !!!
That NEVER .... Runs Dry .........................................................................
UNLIKE ... Oil Pipelines ... !!!!
Or .... Wells Now Refined ...
To The Point Where Pollution's ...
Creating ... “ A Future “ ...
Where People COLLIDE ...
Over ... What They Provide ... !!!
Revolutions Inclined ...
To Affect People's Lives ...
In Ways NOT SO NICE ... !!!!!
When What They INCITE ...
Are Stand Offs and Fights ...
These Days ... MANY Try ...
Protesting ..... On Lines ...
To FORCE Revolutions ...
of ... Different Types ... !!!
Financial ... Contractual ...
To Things That Are Natural ...
Like ....
Fairness For ... ALL ... !!!
A Call I STAND FOR ....
Before ... Going To War ... !!!!!
Now ... There Is A Thought ....
Revolving ... Like Doors ... !!!
If People Were ... EQUAL ...
Would Wars Have A Cause .... ?!?
Or Create ... A Force ...
For Us To ... Love MORE ... ???
In A World WITHOUT ... War ...
Wouldn't People Be Bored ... ?
Does Anyone Now ...
REALLY CARE ANYMORE ... !?!
Well ... One Things For SURE ... !!!
These Thoughts I ... EXPLORE ...
Can Be ...
Simply Defined ...
As .....
... " Revolutions of My Mind ... "
Listen Here :
https://soundcloud.com/user-16569179/revolutions-of-my-mind/s-Ztl93
When I Write Rhymes ...
I Think You'll Find ...
That They're ...
Best Defined ...
As .....
" Revolutions of My Mind " ...
A Definition ... Befitting ...
of My Written Inscriptions ...
Descriptive Depictions ...
of ... Human Existence ...
Killings By ... “ VILLAINS “ ...
Whose Visions Are Driven ...
By ... Levels of Thinking ...
LOCKED IN ...
... "Mental PRISONS" ... !!!
Mind States ... Revolting ...
In Ways .... SO REVOLTING ..... !!!!!
That Their ... Revolutions ...
Are CLEARLY ... POLLUTED ...
And NEEDING ... IMPROVEMENTS ...
In Terms of ... Their Movements ... !!!!
It Seems They NEED Tutors ...
To Give Them Solutions ...
To Their Revolutions ...
Those ... LESS Evolved ... !!!
Than Those That Revolve ...
In Ways That ... DISPLAY ...
Usage ... of The Brain ...
That Helps To ... EASE Pain ... !!!
So That ... REVOLUTIONS ...
RETIRE ... Confusion ... !!!
Inside of THE MIND ... !!!!!
A Place That I Find ...
When Writing These Rhymes ...
That ...
Keep Me INSPIRED ...
When ... Mentally Tired ...
Revolutions ... REQUIRED ... !!!!!
That Have NO Gunfire ... !!!
Or ... NEED For Barbed Wire ...
To Fight The Empire !!!! ...
Just THINKING That's ... HIGHER ...
Than Those Who ... "Conspire" ...
Because They Are .... LIARS .... !!!!!
" Revolutions of My Mind " ...
Are Those ...
WELL Designed ... !!!
In ... Poetic Lines ....
of Verse I Now Write ...
Selective .... Impressive ...
And FAR From ............... Defective .............. !!!!
Collected ... Inspected ...
And YES .... Fuel Injected .... !!!!!
Because Their Directives ...
Have THOUGHTS As The Fuel ...
They ... CONTINUALLY Use ... !!!!!
A Fuel ... WELL PROTECTED ... !!!
That NEVER .... Runs Dry .........................................................................
UNLIKE ... Oil Pipelines ... !!!!
Or .... Wells Now Refined ...
To The Point Where Pollution's ...
Creating ... “ A Future “ ...
Where People COLLIDE ...
Over ... What They Provide ... !!!
Revolutions Inclined ...
To Affect People's Lives ...
In Ways NOT SO NICE ... !!!!!
When What They INCITE ...
Are Stand Offs and Fights ...
These Days ... MANY Try ...
Protesting ..... On Lines ...
To FORCE Revolutions ...
of ... Different Types ... !!!
Financial ... Contractual ...
To Things That Are Natural ...
Like ....
Fairness For ... ALL ... !!!
A Call I STAND FOR ....
Before ... Going To War ... !!!!!
Now ... There Is A Thought ....
Revolving ... Like Doors ... !!!
If People Were ... EQUAL ...
Would Wars Have A Cause .... ?!?
Or Create ... A Force ...
For Us To ... Love MORE ... ???
In A World WITHOUT ... War ...
Wouldn't People Be Bored ... ?
Does Anyone Now ...
REALLY CARE ANYMORE ... !?!
Well ... One Things For SURE ... !!!
These Thoughts I ... EXPLORE ...
Can Be ...
Simply Defined ...
As .....
... " Revolutions of My Mind ... "
Listen Here :
https://soundcloud.com/user-16569179/revolutions-of-my-mind/s-Ztl93
Published 10th Oct 2019
Author's Note
Basically inspired by the current global climate of public protestation, over this and that ......
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10th Oct 2019 11:53am
the reflection of humankind is a every changing of thoughts and ideas some we move forward upon but others we fall short to complete or change...nicely composed my friend
10th Oct 2019 5:52pm
Respect Stoney,
Well, forward thinking is my business, that's the change i'd like to see in more of humanity !
One.
Virge
Well, forward thinking is my business, that's the change i'd like to see in more of humanity !
One.
Virge
11th Oct 2019 12:11pm
i agree it would be nice to see that type of change in humanity for its like the world has lost touch with life and its sad for even when i go out for a walk, i see so much has change over the years there is more disrespect from some of our children's and dishonesty in folks heart and mind amongst folks, for i remember when we use to pick up the phone and just call someone and talk with one another are just stop by for a visit and hang out together, that's why i enjoy your writing for you talk about now even though the pieces i read were written years ago but they have a haunting feelings that resonates from echos from the past...RESPECT
12th Oct 2019 00:22am
Hopefully, not too haunting bro, but I hear ya though ....
and Thanks Again ...
I just write what I see ...
V
and Thanks Again ...
I just write what I see ...
V
12th Oct 2019 1:09pm
RESPECT BROTHER..its not to haunting but it just amazes me how the folks and world changed so much for when you get to my age 60 and you remember how humanity was back then, when we as all people had respect honor and love in our hearts and minds they call it elevation of society, i call it confusion of the computer age for life gotten so easy till when you break up with someone you send a text instead of being upfront and honest for some folks lost the ability to think for thyself, but this is the world we live within now you do make a mind reflect back with your words just by telling it like it truly is this thing called LIFE..
