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Goodbye
Blood thirsty
Pain hungry
I want to say goodbye
Goodbye...
I want to listen to your cry
As you scream in agony
The blades cut through your flesh
Once more, I begin to make you dance
Scream for me as I tear away your flesh
Yell as I cut bone
I watch your face, savoring your fear
The pain I give you is
Oh so dear
As I watch your eyes slowly fade
Your skin turn cold and blue
I say before you die,
"Goodbye."
Pain hungry
I want to say goodbye
Goodbye...
I want to listen to your cry
As you scream in agony
The blades cut through your flesh
Once more, I begin to make you dance
Scream for me as I tear away your flesh
Yell as I cut bone
I watch your face, savoring your fear
The pain I give you is
Oh so dear
As I watch your eyes slowly fade
Your skin turn cold and blue
I say before you die,
"Goodbye."
Published 21st Dec 2011
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21st Dec 2011 5:33pm
this reminds me of going into battle and entering with a heart of a warrior without fear.
21st Dec 2011 6:07pm
thank you, it makes me happy that it can be read with different meanings to others. . . it was written as a torchurous poem from my evil mind ^^
22nd Dec 2011 5:58am
22nd Dec 2011 11:14am
You might say goodbye and be happy about it. However you miss that feeling of control and power. So really you really are saying goodbye to yourself religion. Great write too bad the feeling goes away. You always seem to just throw it out there
1st Jan 2012 2:53am
though my feelings do seem to change a lot in my poems, it is because i write them all at once. Other than drawing, this is a way that i figure out and sort out how i feel. I enjoy my poems, but my mind is even darker than what i write... i just cant seem to get it all into words.
