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ERROR: System Overload -- competition piece --
sometimes
it tends to get a little
overwhelming
or just a bit
too loud
too crowded
too much.
I don't want to explain
explicitly why I just need
to be by myself
breathe
from time to time.
you can tell me it's weird
even doubt my reasons
but don't expect me
to apologize.
it tends to get a little
overwhelming
or just a bit
too loud
too crowded
too much.
I don't want to explain
explicitly why I just need
to be by myself
breathe
from time to time.
you can tell me it's weird
even doubt my reasons
but don't expect me
to apologize.
Published 30th Sep 2019
Author's Note
I think I needed a little therapeutic writing today… For the 'Therapeutic Poetry' comp.
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
30th Sep 2019 12:59pm
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30th Sep 2019 2:37pm
But it can be so good, right? To be in that sad and miserable bubble for a little… FEEL that melancholia, then recharge and go out there again. That is what I feel anyway. I totally get it. ;)
Thank you for the praise, HF. And for understanding the issue I'm touching here.
Delanee.
Thank you for the praise, HF. And for understanding the issue I'm touching here.
Delanee.
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
30th Sep 2019 6:04pm
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1st Oct 2019 5:58am
Delanee, I truly love the style & content you weaved. It resonates with me, so I'm right there with you & HF. Seeing your entry may have inspired me to do my own, so thank you... I was intimidated until now. Best wishes in the comp, hun!🌹
13th Oct 2019 7:24pm
Thank you very much, Pandora. ❤️ I'm glad this could inspire you in any way, it's always nice when writing has that effect. Thank you for telling me and for reading it.
Delanee
Delanee
9th Oct 2019 2:30am
I was looking down the rabbit hole while reading this. Know we can fall together or I can push you, yet I will hold your hand all the way down #icanrelate <3
13th Oct 2019 7:25pm
This is the nicest and sweetest comment yet. Thank you very much, mysteriouslady.
I appreciate your thoughts very deeply.
Delanee
I appreciate your thoughts very deeply.
Delanee
13th Oct 2019 9:55pm
14th Oct 2019 6:12pm
Brava Delanee! Definitely no apology necessary. Alone-time is essential to our sanity. I need it everyday. So you're a healthy, intelligent being.
14th Oct 2019 8:31pm
Thank you again for your encouraging words, Gahddess. I always appreciate seeing your comments on my work.
It is essential indeed... I just wish some people would understand this better.
Delanee
It is essential indeed... I just wish some people would understand this better.
Delanee
14th Oct 2019 9:06pm
I'll repeat a quote that's been attributed to many, "What others think of you is none of your business."
