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blindsided
we were walking
on a trail by the
woods on one of
those long, lazy
August evenings
and he said...
"I have something
to tell you."
"yes?"
"Im in love with
you."
I took my car keys
out of my pocket
and gouged out
both of my eyes
and replied...
"I just can't see it
happening my
dear...i just can't
see it happening."
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Re. blindsided
26th Sep 2019 11:35pm
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26th Sep 2019 11:44pm
Re: Re. blindsided
27th Sep 2019 9:26am
Re. blindsided
26th Sep 2019 11:57pm
I seeee....... That is the ultimate sarcasm !!... Loved it's braved response lol Aloha for the share
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Re: Re. blindsided
27th Sep 2019 9:29am
Yeah. Sometimes you know things/ people are players so its best just to move on. Thank you for your thoughts.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. blindsided
27th Sep 2019 00:23am
Sometimes we don't feel worthy or can't accept something beautiful is happening because we can't see it. This poem is as solid in truth as it is wisdom, Kitts.
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Re: Re. blindsided
27th Sep 2019 9:31am
And sometimes you know when someone is just using you to get their own narcissistic needs met lol.
luv'
buddhakitty.
luv'
buddhakitty.
Re. blindsided
27th Sep 2019 00:24am
Damn good! I like what Somerset Maugham said about love...love is a cruel trick perpetuated on us by nature in order that we keep breeding lol.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. blindsided
27th Sep 2019 9:33am
Biological is a real bitch Harry lol. Whats love got to do with it.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. blindsided
27th Sep 2019 9:24am
Re: Re. blindsided
27th Sep 2019 9:35am
Thank you luv. Sometimes you just gotta know when to get out of something.
hug's
buddhakitty
hug's
buddhakitty