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Wonderful Bewonderment
There’s something about him...
...or is it what lives inside him?....
...that draws my attention in his direction.
It’s not that I’m hoping to save him...
...he’s just lost and it shows.
Maybe, it’s that we’re both trapped
within the darkness, inside our own minds.
Torn between the angels seeking chaos and the demons seeking peace.
...or is it what lives inside him?....
...that draws my attention in his direction.
It’s not that I’m hoping to save him...
...he’s just lost and it shows.
Maybe, it’s that we’re both trapped
within the darkness, inside our own minds.
Torn between the angels seeking chaos and the demons seeking peace.
Published 19th Sep 2019
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19th Sep 2019 2:45pm
Bewonderment -- what a wonderful word!
Its meaning can be compared to the period of time where lovers have an insanity
during the onset of falling in between lust and love.
Intriguing spill, here
Its meaning can be compared to the period of time where lovers have an insanity
during the onset of falling in between lust and love.
Intriguing spill, here
19th Sep 2019 6:29pm
How about the typo (I’ve since fixed it!) that I’d possibly have dismissed for a while, had it not been for your comment? Bewondermewnt?? Lmfao!! Hehehe! I must have been watching Super Troopers!! Hahaha!! Ahhhh.....too funny!
You asked for Friendly feedback
& why i didn't mention the typo
I knew what You meant : )
Due to my OCD
there's not much that i miss in the way of
spelling, punctuation or grammar
& why i didn't mention the typo
I knew what You meant : )
Due to my OCD
there's not much that i miss in the way of
spelling, punctuation or grammar
19th Sep 2019 7:24pm
19th Sep 2019 7:26pm
19th Sep 2019 7:48pm
I too have ocd, and have more than obsession with grammar, punctuation and sentence structure. I have come to notice that you have a similar attribute! Rare these days, but very welcome here! I can’t believe I let that one slip past my spidey senses!! Lol
I have lots of weird talents
that most people don't
Just another thing that makes me
unique
& alone
Do You love to play Chess?
If You do then this game (Poem) will make sense:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/331956-mates/
that most people don't
Just another thing that makes me
unique
& alone
Do You love to play Chess?
If You do then this game (Poem) will make sense:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/331956-mates/
19th Sep 2019 7:52pm
Rollin’ down the street smokin’ endows, sippin’ on gin ‘n juice.....laid back......lol
30th Sep 2019 7:10am
By the way, I'm an asshole! I just saw this comment from a trillion ages ago!! (wow) I did as a child, but not for many years. I know what each piece is named and their role, function and position on the board, but I often have wanted to learn. I think I'd be alright at it. Why.....Do YOU play chess?? Lol (as if you wouldn't, with a big beautiful brain such as yours)
30th Sep 2019 5:23pm
I used to teach Beginners' Chess
at 14 elementary schools in the
Phoenix, AZ, metro area
and helped run tournaments for the kids.
I've been playing chess since i was 6
at 14 elementary schools in the
Phoenix, AZ, metro area
and helped run tournaments for the kids.
I've been playing chess since i was 6
30th Sep 2019 10:48pm
30th Sep 2019 10:50pm
I believe i could.
This is the best site that i found as User Friendly
&
they under the Learning Tab there are some great Helps.
https://lichess.org/learn#/
I've played Sky_dancer (here in DUP) on this site but she doesn't want to play me again until she has practiced and learned more. Her sons and her Beau is helping her, i think. I told her i could play her AND ALL HER HELPS at the same time. LOL
Anyways...........
This is the best site that i found as User Friendly
&
they under the Learning Tab there are some great Helps.
https://lichess.org/learn#/
I've played Sky_dancer (here in DUP) on this site but she doesn't want to play me again until she has practiced and learned more. Her sons and her Beau is helping her, i think. I told her i could play her AND ALL HER HELPS at the same time. LOL
Anyways...........
1st Oct 2019 3:06pm
Anyways. ........ no doubt that you have the ability to not just "play" with a multitude of opponents, I've got a hunch you might be privy to "toying" with them as well! All of them, simultaneously, while schooling them with your mad skilllzzz dawg! ! Lmao
Jokes!! Well, not entirely joking about that statement, or at all, in actuality. More joking about my hardcore, West sigh-eed, g'd up from the feet up, lingo. I am such a dork! Holy damn, I'm special. Lol sorry, in a wierd-o mood atm. We must discuss this chess school. As I had said previously, I know the basic foundation stuff. I am quite lacking however, in conducting the birth, then the execution, of strategic planning to f@#k your queen''s day up! The queen's a tart!! Tee hee jk. I wouldn't be able to fight my way out of a wet paper bag in a epic battle of cunning and Witt opposite of YOUR queen . You, no doubt, are Maximus to your queen (Marcus Aurelius) in chess. Oooo!!! oooo!!! Second comparison to....drum roll please!!! And the award goes to.......Russell Crow!! Bwa ha! I am a lame ass this day! The only truth I have to be accepting of here is that I'll never beat you at chess (save not countless efforts to do so) because you are you, and I am not! I am looking forward to losing though. The loss would reveal that you dont pity me, along with my fruitless attempts at victory. I would have no other option but to learn something! (Other than the spanking you'll no doubt be giving me!)
So, hey.......um........sup?? Tee hee (is the moon full right now?? My energies are crazy right now! Lol ) where do you live? I mean, if I overstepped by inquiring, please don't hesitate to tell me to take it raw and borderline freaky with the fuck that you're bestowing upon me. Wow, that's the sexiest descriptive for saying "fuck you" EVER! Double wow...I am an IDIOT!! LMAO
Jokes!! Well, not entirely joking about that statement, or at all, in actuality. More joking about my hardcore, West sigh-eed, g'd up from the feet up, lingo. I am such a dork! Holy damn, I'm special. Lol sorry, in a wierd-o mood atm. We must discuss this chess school. As I had said previously, I know the basic foundation stuff. I am quite lacking however, in conducting the birth, then the execution, of strategic planning to f@#k your queen''s day up! The queen's a tart!! Tee hee jk. I wouldn't be able to fight my way out of a wet paper bag in a epic battle of cunning and Witt opposite of YOUR queen . You, no doubt, are Maximus to your queen (Marcus Aurelius) in chess. Oooo!!! oooo!!! Second comparison to....drum roll please!!! And the award goes to.......Russell Crow!! Bwa ha! I am a lame ass this day! The only truth I have to be accepting of here is that I'll never beat you at chess (save not countless efforts to do so) because you are you, and I am not! I am looking forward to losing though. The loss would reveal that you dont pity me, along with my fruitless attempts at victory. I would have no other option but to learn something! (Other than the spanking you'll no doubt be giving me!)
So, hey.......um........sup?? Tee hee (is the moon full right now?? My energies are crazy right now! Lol ) where do you live? I mean, if I overstepped by inquiring, please don't hesitate to tell me to take it raw and borderline freaky with the fuck that you're bestowing upon me. Wow, that's the sexiest descriptive for saying "fuck you" EVER! Double wow...I am an IDIOT!! LMAO
