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You ?
With wit
so quick
We see
eye to eye
Dance
toe to toe
You bend
I dip
A touch
like
whoa
Forward
onward
we
go
Mind
blown
Similarities
shown
Analytic
oddities
Subtle
modesty
Alpha
to my
Beta
Kinetic
energy
flows
Here
And
Now
Our match
is met
Could we
take this
slow
We are
new
to this
so quick
We see
eye to eye
Dance
toe to toe
You bend
I dip
A touch
like
whoa
Forward
onward
we
go
Mind
blown
Similarities
shown
Analytic
oddities
Subtle
modesty
Alpha
to my
Beta
Kinetic
energy
flows
Here
And
Now
Our match
is met
Could we
take this
slow
We are
new
to this
Published 19th Dec 2011
| Edited 23rd Dec 2011
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Anonymous
20th Dec 2011 8:26am
Latin American dance, its my favourite dance form. For me you have done a marvelous job of getting the rhythmn and steps perfect your one two three count is brilliant. It has to be slow...
20th Dec 2011 1:59pm
Hey Alip:)
@Dance-Hmm so i see you picked up on that.
@steps yh when you first learn a dance or anything for that matter taking it slow you everything is absorbed is recommended.
I had a beat in my head something merengue and i tried to space the words to it. Chulo, para el comentario muchos gracias
@Dance-Hmm so i see you picked up on that.
@steps yh when you first learn a dance or anything for that matter taking it slow you everything is absorbed is recommended.
I had a beat in my head something merengue and i tried to space the words to it. Chulo, para el comentario muchos gracias
23rd Dec 2011 2:50pm
This at least so far is the first poem that makes me want to pick up my bass. I would say the six string guitar as well but I think I might be a bit more skillful at providing the backing beat.
Also reminds me of the song "Dancing Cheek To Cheek", though I can say I am not old enough to recall when that came out.
Also reminds me of the song "Dancing Cheek To Cheek", though I can say I am not old enough to recall when that came out.
23rd Dec 2011 3:08pm
jm:)
[giggles] @I can say I am not old enough to recall when that came out.
I LOVEEE bass:D yh youre probably more skillful i cant play any musical instrument well.
[giggles] @I can say I am not old enough to recall when that came out.
I LOVEEE bass:D yh youre probably more skillful i cant play any musical instrument well.
23rd Dec 2011 3:41pm
some people call the human voice the most perfect instrument that all of us can use
