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Blade
Apprehension
Cold
Hard
Steel
Pressed against flesh
Inhale
No more regrets
Wrist now impaled
The blade sliding along
Warm stinging pain
A stream of blood
Following behind
An inch at a time
Leaving separated flesh
Marked in red
The tip touching a vein
Momentary suspension
Cut
No restrain
A stream now a river
A gash from a sliver
Collapsing onto the floor
Fading to blackness
No more
Cold
Hard
Steel
Pressed against flesh
Inhale
No more regrets
Wrist now impaled
The blade sliding along
Warm stinging pain
A stream of blood
Following behind
An inch at a time
Leaving separated flesh
Marked in red
The tip touching a vein
Momentary suspension
Cut
No restrain
A stream now a river
A gash from a sliver
Collapsing onto the floor
Fading to blackness
No more
Published 10th Sep 2019
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11th Sep 2019 8:09am
Your spill - expertly spilled with methodical step-by-steps
for clarity in image and color
reminded me of a spill i posted a while back only mine was graphic to the eyes i think:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/332882-a-small-cut/
for clarity in image and color
reminded me of a spill i posted a while back only mine was graphic to the eyes i think:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/332882-a-small-cut/
