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A Moment of Peace
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A retreat in a wood
A walk-in cabin high up in a redwood forest.
A silence so sudden that I hear it.
A moment of peace
Hole punch clouds...
Holes in the clouds by twos...
Just like eyes...
Just like fleeting looks of agony passing across the sky.
Later...
Night moves
The trees drift by, passing shadows in the fog,..
Foggy kaleidoscope
... ...
A retreat in a wood
A walk-in cabin high up in a redwood forest.
A silence so sudden that I hear it.
A moment of peace
Hole punch clouds...
Holes in the clouds by twos...
Just like eyes...
Just like fleeting looks of agony passing across the sky.
Later...
Night moves
The trees drift by, passing shadows in the fog,..
Foggy kaleidoscope
... ...
Published 19th Aug 2019
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19th Aug 2019 7:33pm
Bravo, Marks! You describe a frequently sought after peace. I very much miss the redwoods. This passage is beautiful:
"A silence so sudden that I hear it. "
"A silence so sudden that I hear it. "
20th Aug 2019 00:02am
19th Aug 2019 7:36pm
20th Aug 2019 00:02am
22nd Aug 2019 1:12am
“Hole punch clouds...
Holes in the clouds by twos...
Just like eyes...
Just like fleeting looks of agony passing across the sky.”
Loved this stanza. Beautifully done. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
Holes in the clouds by twos...
Just like eyes...
Just like fleeting looks of agony passing across the sky.”
Loved this stanza. Beautifully done. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
23rd Aug 2019 1:43am
