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Ignite
Light my fire,
Strike the match,
Breaking from myself
Detached
Burn my body,
Burn my dreams,
Burn my hopes and
Reality
Fade into the flames,
Crumble to ashes.
In this dreadful world
Nothing is everlasting.
Strike the match,
Breaking from myself
Detached
Burn my body,
Burn my dreams,
Burn my hopes and
Reality
Fade into the flames,
Crumble to ashes.
In this dreadful world
Nothing is everlasting.
Published 13th Aug 2019
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- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
13th Aug 2019 10:04pm
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13th Aug 2019 10:35pm
14th Aug 2019 3:13am
Dear D,
I love how this reads. It’s very song-like. This has a great meter. Stanza three is especially powerful lyrically. Nothing is meant to last forever. It’s just frustrating when one doesn’t call the shots for the ending.
Wonderful write! H🌷
I love how this reads. It’s very song-like. This has a great meter. Stanza three is especially powerful lyrically. Nothing is meant to last forever. It’s just frustrating when one doesn’t call the shots for the ending.
Wonderful write! H🌷
14th Aug 2019 5:24pm
