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Another life?
Maybe...
This isn't a free life as they tell you,
because they run it.
This isn't a life where you choose your choices,
because they choose them for you.
This isn't life at all.
Because I stopped it
Maybe...
This isn't a free life as they tell you,
because they run it.
This isn't a life where you choose your choices,
because they choose them for you.
This isn't life at all.
Because I stopped it
Published 15th Dec 2011
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15th Dec 2011 7:34pm
Society is the machine that drives everything they want us to be. Which is nothing we are not. I feel the only way to stop it, it to have a voice and yell as loud as you can so deafened ears can hear. However they never listen. I'm glad you can stop it. I really liked this short but a cold hard reality check.
15th Dec 2011 8:24pm
15th Dec 2011 9:46pm
16th Dec 2011 2:43am
one of my favorite teachers inspired it. He is very different but in a good way. Thank to him I have been able to keep writing. XD
