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asphixiated in lit gasoline
..every moment..
..we spent in decay..
..therein..
..we also evolve..
..we spent in decay..
..therein..
..we also evolve..
Published 7th Jan 2010
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2010 11:24am
and amazing four lines.
7th Jan 2010 8:21pm
Anonymous
24th Aug 2011 8:16pm
I love the sentiment and the tight package. Not digging the ellipses abuse :)
Also, your verb tenses clash.
Also, your verb tenses clash.
25th Aug 2011 5:00am
the ellipses abuse is how i got used to writing for a while. just messing around around and experimenting with different ways of using (and abusing as the case may be) capitalization and punctuation or lack of or configuration or manipulation of these and other fine things. we can use words how we want and I do this with punctuation as well as verb clashing if the feeling beckons.. or so i say. i have a flimsy well worn poetic license in my wallet if you'd like to cross words... so to speak.
and thanks. cheers.
and thanks. cheers.
