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Outside Looking In
You'd be scared if you saw
the darkness, the deepness
cobwebs drenched in pain
echoes crawling on hands and knees
feed me, fulfill me
endorphins looking for a living
but trying to get by for free
no coffee, no tea
no chatter, just me
with you on the other side
the dog days are here all nipping afoot
they don't have no teeth
to rip me to shreds
rip me to shreds
I don't mind your teeth
the darkness, the deepness
cobwebs drenched in pain
echoes crawling on hands and knees
feed me, fulfill me
endorphins looking for a living
but trying to get by for free
no coffee, no tea
no chatter, just me
with you on the other side
the dog days are here all nipping afoot
they don't have no teeth
to rip me to shreds
rip me to shreds
I don't mind your teeth
Published 25th Jul 2019
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2019 4:50pm
this ... weakens
my knees;
there is a flip side ❤
25th Jul 2019 7:30pm
26th Jul 2019 00:25am
26th Jul 2019 3:34am
You nailed anticipation Tim! She's just beyond your reach...yet she's right beside you. Her words feed the anticipation! The dogs of Summer feed it until they are rabid!
"Endorphins lookng for a living.."
That is brilliant!
I have to thank you, and your muse ofcourse. Great ink!
-Minx
"Endorphins lookng for a living.."
That is brilliant!
I have to thank you, and your muse ofcourse. Great ink!
-Minx
