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Rose of Sharon
soft Summer breezes stir
pink blossoms bob in its wake
close your eyes, hear my sighs
something holy between us
serenity devine
Sharon is there, putting on her full display
no need for man's ornamentation
just her, in sweet simplicity nature's glory appreciated by us two
so down times road
when you are blessed to behold
Sharon's rose, Summer's perfection
think of me, not perfect, but present
anytime life mistreats
I am your rose, love
all you need
is to come to me
Published 19th Jul 2019
| Edited 22nd Jul 2019
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19th Jul 2019 5:14pm
think of me, not perfect, but present
anytime life mistreats
I am your rose, love
all you need is to come to me
I love the scenery painted in this whole piece, but this last part really stuck out to me. Not perfect, but present ♥️. Gahhh, the feels.
A beautiful spill to start my day, thank you for sharing it.
anytime life mistreats
I am your rose, love
all you need is to come to me
I love the scenery painted in this whole piece, but this last part really stuck out to me. Not perfect, but present ♥️. Gahhh, the feels.
A beautiful spill to start my day, thank you for sharing it.
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
20th Jul 2019 2:15am
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20th Jul 2019 2:20am
I was going to go all in on the bobbing pink blossoms, but I’m glad you mentioned it. Great minds, and all that jazz.
20th Jul 2019 2:21am
It is I who should be thanking you, it’s lovely to read imagery that bursts into bright colors in my mind. This one lit up really well for me 💜
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
20th Jul 2019 2:22am
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You're a mess HF! I guess if you're looking at it from that perspective this is my ode to the birds and the bees? LOL
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
21st Jul 2019 2:28am
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22nd Jul 2019 4:26pm
You do realize this is about a blooming tree called the "Rose of Sharon" right?
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
22nd Jul 2019 5:27pm
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No worries! My mind stays in the gutter so i figured thats what you thought by the "love the one you're with" comment. I let you hold on to that thought for awhile before clue'n you in, LOL!! Dare to dream right?
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
19th Jul 2019 5:24pm
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21st Jul 2019 1:52am
Thank you BP! I have three of them in my backyard. Two of them are pink and a "nature planted" white. (We didn't plant it. It just appeared one day. Good ole bird poop planting) The honey bees and hummingbirds love them. Thank you for the read and taking time to comment.
19th Jul 2019 9:28pm
Anonymous
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19th Jul 2019 9:35pm
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Anonymous
20th Jul 2019 1:32am
Truly beautiful poem.
22nd Jul 2019 00:00am
This is truly an amazing piece of powerful and poignant ink Minx...love it!!!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
22nd Sep 2019 11:52am
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21st Dec 2019 9:05pm
Althea by another name but just the same.....such a beautiful plant.
not planted as often as in days gone by...
i use it in my designs...
your words do capture the spirit.
not planted as often as in days gone by...
i use it in my designs...
your words do capture the spirit.
