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Caught Within
I’m in a love triangle like no other,
before or since.
One, she is from across the raucous sea!
the other from across the void of eternity.
My heart is pulled.
Should I stay or should I go?
before or since.
One, she is from across the raucous sea!
the other from across the void of eternity.
My heart is pulled.
Should I stay or should I go?
Published 11th Jul 2019
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
11th Jul 2019 2:58pm
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11th Jul 2019 6:30pm
Anonymous
11th Jul 2019 5:48pm
An intriguing brevity and the ending is catchy as it let's the reader have his/her own answer to the question. Inspired.
11th Jul 2019 6:32pm
Wonderful. Thank you. Yes, I looked at the ending and thought just what you said. Thanks, again.
