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kitchen drama
Kitchen drama
We were poor
Shared our kitchen with the woman next door
She was in her thirties
I was fifteen.
We met in the kitchen
It started with a kiss
It ended with full sex.
Mother found out
Called our neighbour a wore gave her a slap
Across her face.
To me, she said.
How could you with that woman!
We were poor
Shared our kitchen with the woman next door
She was in her thirties
I was fifteen.
We met in the kitchen
It started with a kiss
It ended with full sex.
Mother found out
Called our neighbour a wore gave her a slap
Across her face.
To me, she said.
How could you with that woman!
Published 11th Jul 2019
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11th Jul 2019 1:36pm
I have always found it societally strange that a 30 year old woman seducing a 15 year old boy is acceptable, and even a trophy for the boy ( to a degree, i.e. - older woman, etc. ); however, a 30 year old man seducing a 15 year old girl is catastrophic. I am not judging your poem - it's a great poem. I am just making a general observation that came to mind when reading it.
I agree with HF, add that so the reader doesn't stumble when reading.
I agree with HF, add that so the reader doesn't stumble when reading.
11th Jul 2019 2:54pm
aaaah You took me to a time at summer camp where i had sex (all summer) with a 26 year old and i was 15 at the time. Fond memories.
I just figured they had a different mindset out in the country and i was not complaining. I looked forward to summer camp the following year but by then she had herself a bf.
I just figured they had a different mindset out in the country and i was not complaining. I looked forward to summer camp the following year but by then she had herself a bf.
