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Whisper of the heart
One true look is all you need,
to find the one you secretly seek,
Companion for life that you desire,
to start your inner fire.
To feel the reason of your existence,
from happiness, to reduce the distance.
Whisper of the heart will let you know,
if she is your stars glow.
to find the one you secretly seek,
Companion for life that you desire,
to start your inner fire.
To feel the reason of your existence,
from happiness, to reduce the distance.
Whisper of the heart will let you know,
if she is your stars glow.
Published 9th Dec 2011
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Anonymous
15th Dec 2011 12:58pm
Okay you have four stanzas two lines each and 8 wonderful phrases / metaphors I would love to quote... (((CLAPS))) I am so glad I read this today. And I love it all but you end it beautifuly "if she is your stars glow." I love that.
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2012 8:50am
Very Beautiful write :)
9th Jan 2012 11:02am
