A Mere Scrape

very deep feeling here dearest Tim that sense of doubt
don't let it haunt you what you desire will be a reality
of biting her and making her scream in fate's time...

just what I see...

great write...

love Brenda ❤

Thanks dearest Brenda 🙂

I read this one and my mind automatically capitalized Doubt. It's a bugger, that doubt stuff. I love the way you wrote this and the ending....like talking yourself through it. I totally get this one!

Doubt is definitely a nasty little bugger, it can creep into the mind and take over...thanks Willow 😊

and I quote Master Chief:

 ``the best thing about pain ... it
lets you know you`re not dead yet`` ... Ah, ha!

The best thing about you, luv,
is that you know how
to nurse those mere scrapes
without a doubt of how
to nurse them and move on ...
it`s almost like life; these
annoying little obstacles thrashed
upon your flesh, and knowing
that when they heal, you`ve
healed ... but however MO, I
did enjoy the incorporation of
lust versed in those last stanzas
because it only shows
that where`s pain you can always
bring the joy ... ❤

my beautiful Queen I agree with you the lusty interlude inserted in this poem is beautiful...

love Brenda ❤

There's always room for a little lust 💖

I admire poems with
a twist, because just when
you think it`s going to end
on the same note
it was started on, it ends
with something totally
different!

Thank you, my Queen
for your thoughts🤗

you know it's funny when my poems have a twist it's a surprise to me to I never know where a poem is going to go lol...

this was great I didn't see that part coming but it was a nice surprise,,,

love you my Queen ❤

I say
I do the same thing
but my
angst poetry rambles
are pretty
predictable 😁!

aw I don't think so you blow my mind seriously ❤

this write is great because you show your humanness here Tim...

sorry, luv, if crim & I
are cluttering your
comments with
conversation ... we
leave now 😉

You're right, the nibbles are more important than doubt, thanks hrshykss 🙂