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i want to see
"close your eyes...fantasize
dream of a world were madness is erased
and all your sadness is replaced.
feel the fresh air threw your hair,
and a peacful world were everybody care.
belive that this day you are finally set free,
and all your wishis you can see.
open your eyes" is what he say
but all i see is reality not fun and play.
"dont you feel released for a brand new day?"
becouse he dosnt understand the words i say.
"this is a world so bad its true,
no one can chang its up to you."
i leve this story from begining and start...
demone and soul joined apart.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
dream of a world were madness is erased
and all your sadness is replaced.
feel the fresh air threw your hair,
and a peacful world were everybody care.
belive that this day you are finally set free,
and all your wishis you can see.
open your eyes" is what he say
but all i see is reality not fun and play.
"dont you feel released for a brand new day?"
becouse he dosnt understand the words i say.
"this is a world so bad its true,
no one can chang its up to you."
i leve this story from begining and start...
demone and soul joined apart.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
Written by
AlexnEmoLand
(RevolutionOfAlex)
Published 8th Dec 2011
| Edited 11th Dec 2011
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8th Dec 2011 8:33pm
"You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one..."
One suggestion that may help---a few words misspelled. (I say that mind you as an American, and the British claim we messed up their language :)
One suggestion that may help---a few words misspelled. (I say that mind you as an American, and the British claim we messed up their language :)
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9th Dec 2011 00:50am
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13th Dec 2011 8:44pm
hey it's mr J ha ha and I would say you American's are basically us anyway and let's just say you took out some of the stupid letters and re-spelled things as they sound which kind of makes sense in a way :)
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14th Dec 2011 00:46am
nice
13th Dec 2011 8:41pm
that was a nice and calm message of fact and realisation , good work PJG heheheh
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13th Dec 2011 11:14pm
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20th Jan 2012 7:50pm
cool
9th Mar 2012 8:24am
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