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A rose with petals of titanium
Her bloody thorns tiny daggers
ripped my flesh, elevated me
I kneel, and know she is my love
Her bloody thorns tiny daggers
ripped my flesh, elevated me
I kneel, and know she is my love
Published 16th Jun 2019
| Edited 16th Jun 2020
Author's Note
COMPETITION PIECE: Doppelganger: the DUP Oscars. I wrote this for Delanee, She has a razor sharp terse verse that takes my breath away.
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
17th Jun 2019 00:56am
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17th Jun 2019 10:13am
What a lovely sentiment, HF. And you're right, this piece is bloody excellent!
17th Jun 2019 7:40am
17th Jun 2019 12:50pm
How else should one take love? To me, take it all or don't take at all.
17th Jun 2019 2:07pm
17th Jun 2019 10:12am
Oh my dear Silence, this is simply wonderful! I definitely feel that you've mastered my terse style… SUCH LOVE! I am overwhelmed… <3
17th Jun 2019 12:53pm
My dearest, I can see already a word that should have been left out. :) In all seriousness, terse-verse is wildly satisfying and maddening at the same time to write. It walks a fine line akin to a tightrope, and pieces like yours leave no safety net.
Even so, the piece demanded to be written, and you know of my affections as they are.
Your Silence
Even so, the piece demanded to be written, and you know of my affections as they are.
Your Silence
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Sep 2020 00:45am
22nd Nov 2019 1:58am
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