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Jade Fields
We are microbes in attemption
to comb over vast jade fields of prodigy
We dont always make it
our capricious nirvana
You can imagine
being vacuumed
up there
into the heavenly
angelic air
as if lariated
by an oversized
but friendly bear
Amongst floatation
planets are rotating
spinning around
under a ceremonial
medieval
beethoven
orchestral symphany sound
your now spiritual eyes are in collision
with this now realistic dilusion
its hard to concieve
that this is a reprieve
from this microbe existance
upon the jade fields
we try to cross
with day to day
persistance .
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Published 5th Jan 2010
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12th Jan 2010 8:15am
and i love all of the words you used, and how the end mirrored the beginning. also, kudos for mentioning beethoven! :P
12th Jan 2010 4:57pm
As are you and thankyou for your positive comment I appreciate it very much :)))
