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Leave The Surface Alone

The more
you scratch
the surface,

the more
surface
you scratch...
takis1917
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Re. Leave The Surface Alone
28th May 2019 00:22am
I love your style dearest Takis...

love Brenda ❤
smackdownraven
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Re: Re. Leave The Surface Alone
28th May 2019 12:27pm
Thank you, dear Brenda!
takis1917
Re. Leave The Surface Alone
28th May 2019 00:34am
Indeed! No sense running through the rain!
:P Bim
bimbammit
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Re: Re. Leave The Surface Alone
28th May 2019 12:29pm
Unless your zig-zag running avoids the rain drops...:)
Thank you for reading and commenting!
takis1917
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28th May 2019 00:54am
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Anonymous
Re: Re. Leave The Surface Alone
28th May 2019 12:32pm
... when the fingernails are itching, but not the skin...:)
takis1917
Re. Leave The Surface Alone
(Noire)
28th May 2019 4:30am
lol, eeeek, ..!
HowlingWhelms
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Re: Re. Leave The Surface Alone
28th May 2019 12:35pm
we often fancy us much more significant than we are...
takis1917
Re. Leave The Surface Alone
29th May 2019 11:16pm
Another pithy ... crisp poem ... bravo takis ...
LilDragonFly
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Re. Leave The Surface Alone
5th Feb 2021 5:09am
Good stuff.  Liked it
Joemarcello
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