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Today IV

Today,
he started the day
underground
taking notes...

- Out of the blue,
an eye...
A left eye...
A leftist's eye...
The eye of the Left...
An eye to the left of the beholder's blurred vision...

- Colour: Greenish... Grayish... Hazel... Not sure...

- It winked! The left eye winked!...
- Did it?... Winking in doubt...

Turned notebook's page
allowing mind to race...

- In doubt, in doubt, again...
- When in doubt, what?...

Today,
he started the day
at the bottom...
Left hand holding pen
suspended over untaken, yet, notes...

- A flash... A flare... A gleam... A blink...

Together,
they sucked him
in a bottomless pit...
Written by takis1917
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