Poems
Spoken Word
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets
Toggle navigation
Create Account
Log In
Poems and Stories
Spoken Word Poetry
Groups
Forums
Competitions
Poets and Writers
Search
Help
This website requires Javascript to work properly, please enable Javascript in your web browser settings.
Welcome to Deep Underground Poetry. This website uses cookies.
Continue
Find Out More
Poems
Love
SENRYU - WORSHIP
deepundergroundpoetry.com
SENRYU - WORSHIP
Heady scent allures
Petals wet from homemade dew
Bees brought to their knees
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published
19th May 2019
Like This?
Poems by Author
Comment
#flowers
#LifeCycle
#love
#lover
#nature
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes
3
reading list entries
0
comments
7
reads
516
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re. SENRYU - WORSHIP
SweetOblivion
20th May 2019 6:47am
Imagines all those hairy knees
Read poems by SweetOblivion
1
Re. SENRYU - WORSHIP
MagicVisionz
(Cortez Love Matrice)
22nd May 2019 8:33pm
Great senryu! I can see this two ways
Read poems by MagicVisionz
1
Re: Re. SENRYU - WORSHIP
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
22nd May 2019 8:41pm
Thank you, Magic! I was hoping the two ways would be inferred. Thank you for the confirmation. I am glad you like the piece.
Read poems by Gahddess_Worship
Re: Re. SENRYU - WORSHIP
MagicVisionz
(Cortez Love Matrice)
22nd May 2019 9:13pm
It's a pleasure Gahddess_Worship. Senryu and Haiku are so fun to write. You mastered them beautifully... cant wait to see more :D
Read poems by MagicVisionz
1
Re: Re. SENRYU - WORSHIP
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
22nd May 2019 9:39pm
Definitely one of my favorite forms. I find that often it takes me longer to write a haiku than to write a much longer poem. The word choices are so important.
Read poems by Gahddess_Worship
Re. SENRYU - WORSHIP
PandoraUnleashed
27th May 2019 3:46am
You always capture a senryu beautifully !💟
Read poems by PandoraUnleashed
1
Re: Re. SENRYU - WORSHIP
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
27th May 2019 5:21am
Thank you do much, Pandora!
Read poems by Gahddess_Worship
Latest Forum Discussions
COMPETITIONS
4 Lines Neatly Tied
Today 6:26am by ThePalestRider
COMPETITIONS
Castles in the Air
Today 6:23am by nmbdedwards
(JustcallmeDee)
COMPETITIONS
Slashers, Freaks, Boogiemen and Ghouls, etc
Today 5:59am by admin
(DU Webmistress)
1
2
COMPETITIONS
Fighting Suicide
Today 5:00am by Helopolis
COMPETITIONS
FRIEND ZONE
Today 2:46am by Lyrically_Inclined
COMPETITIONS
Poem of the Month - November 2024
Today 2:42am by Styxian
1
2
Online Now
×
Close
Online Now
Unredeemed
TellyLace88
DamianDeadLove
magichearts
ThePalestRider
nmbdedwards
MalcolmG
Members Online: 7
Close
×
Close
Error
Close