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Missing Spark
it's not the fighting that's killing me
in the end
it's the not caring like you used to
the lack of unexpected touches
and honest demanding kisses
the missing conviction that
we will face this storm
together
that's what gets me
in the end
it's the not caring like you used to
the lack of unexpected touches
and honest demanding kisses
the missing conviction that
we will face this storm
together
that's what gets me
Published 15th May 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
15th May 2019 3:48pm
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15th May 2019 3:52pm
Thank you, HF! It's my biggest objective. And also it is my worst fear that people will think the words are lacking, or there's just not enough there, or maybe even say that it's superficial.
I'm glad you don't see it that way. Also this feeling I wrote about; It's one of the worst things for me. I'm glad the message came across. ;)
I'm glad you don't see it that way. Also this feeling I wrote about; It's one of the worst things for me. I'm glad the message came across. ;)
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
15th May 2019 3:55pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
16th May 2019 11:07am
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28th May 2019 6:50am
Thank you very much, it means a lot to me so have you say this.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Delanee.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Delanee.
27th May 2019 5:54pm
Wow ... I wish I had the wit to say more but I'm still reeling from the reading.
28th May 2019 6:51am
This is more than enough, thank you very much for your appreciation!
It means the world.
Delanee.
It means the world.
Delanee.
