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This rain mystified
This heart never to lie
This soul never to die
This mind never to cry,
But a secret can't hide,
This love for you inside.
Published 5th May 2019
| Edited 19th May 2019
Author's Note
Into the expanse, we abide
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Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
5th May 2019 7:53pm
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5th May 2019 7:57pm
Love is best expressed in one word....but felt through all words...
Thank you for the affection on this verse, my beautiful friend,
love
Jeff
Thank you for the affection on this verse, my beautiful friend,
love
Jeff
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
5th May 2019 8:00pm
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6th May 2019 1:48am
There’s much beauty found in the abiding moments, and the ties that bind !
6th May 2019 3:57am
The poetic ribbon wraps us all...
Thank you, dearest, for the sweetness...
love
Jeff
Thank you, dearest, for the sweetness...
love
Jeff
6th May 2019 4:26pm
6th May 2019 6:50pm
8th May 2019 11:14pm
Love...a fine line between pleasure and pain Jeff...nice man.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
9th May 2019 5:05am
Thank you, my friend...I agree...probably the same wire between sanity and madness...
Jeff
Jeff
17th May 2019 5:44pm
Just the right amount of rhyme ... I am oh so envious of how you do this ... splendid ...
17th May 2019 10:47pm
4th Jun 2019 6:40am
Mystified yet felt in its wholeness..expressed in its rapturous outpour ..such is love..this rain of pure expression...poetry! write on Jeff dear Poet!
4th Jun 2019 8:24am
Gracie, my sweet friend...you understand so much and feel so deep...very happy this touched you...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
