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broken heart ii

..show me the ugliness..
..which is not in contradiction to intent..
..reasoning clear and balanced..
..evidence aligns with the signature..
..she�ll split my face down the center with her blade..
..(or i hers with mine)..
..into forehead..
..down the bridge of the nose..
..across the lips..
..down the throat..
..without misstep..
..without sidetrack..
..without flitter of uncertainty..
..without hesitating to actualization of objective..
..it has found no relevance in deception..
..it seeks no cause for confusion..
..it will bury its tip in the zion chakra..
..to be in resonace with the ugliness branded here..
..factored and driven in..

Written by noonenothingnone

(nathan i)

Published 4th Jan 2010

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syandene (Sy4ndene)

4th Jan 2010 5:57pm

the subjunctive context of 'a broken heart ii' is so perfectly mirrored in this piece it leaves the reader consuming the piece again and again in order to irrigate the senses from silage that could take away from the perfect absorption of its content. Exquisite.

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noonenothingnone (nathan i)

4th Jan 2010 9:42pm

thank you so much sweetheart.. yeah and it's something we can all relate to.. love and love lost.. like death.. we go through stages like denial and eventually acceptance.. but another stage is anger and I usually write from that place.. at least in the bulk of ones I've posted here.. cheers!!