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Kiss*
Her fine blushing soul
Such a lyric to possess,
Into supernal dreams
A union does caress,
Nevermore to need
Yet only each of her,
Kisses*
Therefore not selfish
In wanting them all,
That initial embrace
Quickly began time,
As this conception
To then finish our,
Kissing*
Rhyme...
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 30th Apr 2019
| Edited 1st May 2019
Author's Note
muuaahh...
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Re. Kiss*
30th Apr 2019 8:59am
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30th Apr 2019 9:05am
Re: Re. Kiss*
30th Apr 2019 9:23am
I love short poems that are tight and distil feelings into as few words as possible and each word becomes a wonderful centre of poetic possibilities
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Re: Re. Kiss*
30th Apr 2019 10:02am
"tight and distill feelings into a centre of poetic possibilities"...seems like a delicious kiss to me
-J
-J
Re. Kiss*
30th Apr 2019 4:45pm
Love the original structure of this ... elegant simplicity ... soothing ... promising ... divine lines ...
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Re: Re. Kiss*
1st May 2019 3:06am
Re. Kiss*
Anonymous
1st May 2019 1:32am
Hey Jeff.......beautiful graceful ink.......a simple kiss can mean so much......if only we all valued the simple acts of luv......thought provoking write......enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Kiss*
1st May 2019 3:08am
Yes, the first kiss is as valuable as the last...so glad you enjoyed my little poem...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Re. Kiss*
1st May 2019 11:04pm
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1st May 2019 11:23pm
Re. Kiss*
2nd May 2019 3:47am
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
10th Jul 2019 12:49pm
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Re: Re. Kiss*
10th Jul 2019 7:33pm
That is the only type if kiss to give...thank you so much, my kissable one...
Love
Jeff
Love
Jeff