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Heart Rain
It always takes me by surprise
Just like a new emotion
Rising up in oil-black bubbles
Or descending as a heavy cloud
Raining on my head like a tragedy
I try to evaporate it
With sunshiney thoughts and songs
Walking in the open wind
But the one thing it demands
Is to talk like lovers do
Alone with my soul I wait
For your ocean to dive into
Kisses that feel like memories
And unity of emotion
Talk to me; here it comes again
Published 14th Apr 2019
Author's Note
Inspired by rain and Eurythmics
https://youtu.be/TzFnYcIqj6I
https://youtu.be/TzFnYcIqj6I
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14th Apr 2019 3:54am
love this K!
..and yes Lovers talk... the way they do..
i reckon they do that without realising.. in short
it's the love that speaks when the lovers talk
and the subject! and the song... both close to my heart!
..and yes Lovers talk... the way they do..
i reckon they do that without realising.. in short
it's the love that speaks when the lovers talk
and the subject! and the song... both close to my heart!
15th Apr 2019 2:16am
Thanks....
Some lonely days, it feels like I can only imagine how lovers talk...
Glad to reach close to your heart. :)
Some lonely days, it feels like I can only imagine how lovers talk...
Glad to reach close to your heart. :)
14th Apr 2019 5:43pm
15th Apr 2019 2:24am
Thank you! It was one of those heavy gray drizzly days.... again... and of course this song popped into my mind. And then it occurred to me how perfectly it describes how I feel when depression descends... and it always feels "new", like the worst thing ever, even though it's happened before and will happen again.... I wonder if it would get easier to deal with if I just got used to it. Like rain. Rain comes, but the good thing is, it also goes away.
Haha, sorry, I digress!! Glad you enjoyed my little wander in the rain!
Haha, sorry, I digress!! Glad you enjoyed my little wander in the rain!
14th Apr 2019 8:39pm
15th Apr 2019 2:30am
It was fun weaving those lyrics in....
Today I walked in the open wind. It was brilliant.
Tomorrow, it's going to rain again. More poetry might happen....
Thanks for stopping by! :)
Today I walked in the open wind. It was brilliant.
Tomorrow, it's going to rain again. More poetry might happen....
Thanks for stopping by! :)
Anonymous
15th Apr 2019 3:37pm
This was a fun write to read. Waiting for the sun but not loosing hope while it's raining. Well done.
15th Apr 2019 3:46pm
