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Why love hurts
Why does love have to hurt?......
Why does love have to blurt?.....
It blurts out L-O-V-E........
It blurts out flee....
Flee from the stresses of what love brings....
Flee from the stresses of why the body tings....
I ask the question what does love bring......
Why does love have to blurt?.....
It blurts out L-O-V-E........
It blurts out flee....
Flee from the stresses of what love brings....
Flee from the stresses of why the body tings....
I ask the question what does love bring......
Published 3rd Apr 2019
Author's Note
What inspired me to write this poem is the feeling that people get when love comes around. Love to many is a strong feeling. So I wanted to introduce that in this poem. I hope people find it very honest and original.
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3rd Apr 2019 6:26am
Well real love I would hope brings u happiness, joy, comfort and dreams out of this world. I like this poem u wrote write here, continue to push that ink and good job😀😀
3rd Apr 2019 6:31pm
Thanks sis for that. I needed that. Over all the breakups and getting hurt has caused me.
3rd Apr 2019 6:03pm
It can sting, but it can also be the right thing. Enjoyed your words and welcome to DUP. You got skills.
3rd Apr 2019 6:30pm
It can and thanks. I am just a few days old. But, here's to the future....
3rd Apr 2019 6:35pm
Love is a war. Hopefully at the end of the war is joy though lol. Nice ink and welcome to DUP.
3rd Apr 2019 6:39pm
3rd Apr 2019 6:44pm
I liked your poem. I enjoy poetry all around though. People and their feels. I been through the war of love and it worked out in the end. This poem reminded me of my own trials. Hope to see more ink from you.
3rd Apr 2019 6:46pm
4th Apr 2019 3:08am
Nice piece! Great penning!
I like the ending line
"I ask the question what does love bring...... "
I like the ending line
"I ask the question what does love bring...... "
4th Apr 2019 7:14pm
4th Apr 2019 9:52pm
5th Apr 2019 00:53am
