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These Boys want me
These boys want me...
I know they do...
Hoping i was they boo .....
could this dream come true?
remember times back in school when i would walk past the bathroom...
To discover these guys calling my name like i was a catwoman in a catroom......
Should i or should i not pursue them?
Like throwing a cheating nigga off a rim.....
Till this day i cry out with such emotion....
These boys want an abduction....
I know they do...
Hoping i was they boo .....
could this dream come true?
remember times back in school when i would walk past the bathroom...
To discover these guys calling my name like i was a catwoman in a catroom......
Should i or should i not pursue them?
Like throwing a cheating nigga off a rim.....
Till this day i cry out with such emotion....
These boys want an abduction....
Published 2nd Apr 2019
| Edited 3rd Apr 2019
Author's Note
This is just how i used to live my life back in school , no questions asked and how i still live my life....
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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2nd Apr 2019 3:09am
2nd Apr 2019 3:16am
Thanks. I didn't think you was gonna like it because i am not an experienced poet. But thank you again it's flattering to know I picked up and discovered a potential fan.
2nd Apr 2019 3:27am
nor i experience poet all i do is put what ever comes to mind be life or fiction just be your self when you write as there be some will not like it as long as you do that all that counts
2nd Apr 2019 3:29am
You are exactly right sir. is sir correct? if not can i call u sir? I feel like this site can help me express what i go through through the torments of this world. I just joined today but seen the hours i been here. i am digging the scene. its fire, bro!
2nd Apr 2019 3:34am
yes in a way Sir is right as i am in my 70's
can call me anything but late for dinner
have a great night
can call me anything but late for dinner
have a great night
2nd Apr 2019 3:36am
2nd Apr 2019 3:22am
Hey good start sis welcome to DUP I hope u find your path on this website and be truly inspired to post your poems here. I'm sure you will be brilliant!!😉😉
2nd Apr 2019 3:24am
Thanks sis. I wanted to submit a poem that is a representation of what i go through sometimes. But im glad you found it appealing.
2nd Apr 2019 1:44pm
I have the same problem with girls...they all want me. What a bummer huh? ;-)
2nd Apr 2019 10:32pm
2nd Apr 2019 10:21pm
Do you baby and express yourself. Good thing you didn't slide into that bathroom or that gangbang could've probably went down. After the pantie drop. Lol Overall very good write.
2nd Apr 2019 10:34pm
2nd Apr 2019 11:04pm
Hello Miss BeautyQueen and welcome to DUP, we hope that you love sharing poetry and hope to share some with you. Tight piece you posted as your first, hope to see you on site
2nd Apr 2019 11:05pm
2nd Apr 2019 11:49pm
3rd Apr 2019 3:08am
Why thank you sir. I appreciate the fact that you found it very pleasing. Not many men like yourself would say that.
