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Untitled 3/23/19
There is nothing else like
Meeting an old friend
Going on adventures
And talking for hours
Meeting an old friend
Going on adventures
And talking for hours
Published 23rd Mar 2019
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23rd Mar 2019 7:09pm
23rd Mar 2019 7:49pm
26th Mar 2019 1:20am
23rd Jun 2019 11:42am
It's like, you took bits and peices from an awesome adventure.
The poem could be better, maybe if it was written as a parable or used metaphorics. I like the simple-shortness of the word and straight to the point feel.
The poem could be better, maybe if it was written as a parable or used metaphorics. I like the simple-shortness of the word and straight to the point feel.
