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From Somebody to Some Body
You liked my lips
Even more when they were blue
I loved to feel your breath on my neck
But that was before the noose
I loved it when you were so attentive
That was the day you put me in your trunk
You insisted on controlling me
I guess it was my dumb luck
Now I'm so cold
Buried in this hole
I'm sure my family misses me
And the life that you stole
Even more when they were blue
I loved to feel your breath on my neck
But that was before the noose
I loved it when you were so attentive
That was the day you put me in your trunk
You insisted on controlling me
I guess it was my dumb luck
Now I'm so cold
Buried in this hole
I'm sure my family misses me
And the life that you stole
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23rd Mar 2019 2:53am
I'm glad you like it Bender! Thanks for the read and comment. I was really into forensics in college. I dont know if I'm glad or scared, lol!
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Re. From Somebody to Some Body
27th May 2019 12:49pm
Wow, so very Poe-esque… I kinda like the darkness to it.
It really draws me in. Great ink!
Delanee.
It really draws me in. Great ink!
Delanee.
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