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Black bag spins feline cartwheel
Capoera battles phantom moth
Mighty oak hushes talkative starlings
Murmuration leaves gossiping wind
Impatient teapot screams forgotten
Loneliness steams scalding tears
Smug carton prankster hides
Odiferous milky curdled miasma
Emotional vein gushes endless
Exsanguinates razor-sorrow red
Published 19th Mar 2019
| Edited 20th Mar 2019
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20th Mar 2019 3:36pm
That second couplet is a gold mine of imagery.
I like this stream of consciousness. Paying attention is good.
I like this stream of consciousness. Paying attention is good.
21st Mar 2019 12:53pm
