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You do have one word misused, David...
it's in stanza one on line two...
you have made ''shot's'' a possessive...
and that, my friend, is a Boo Boo...
Properly written the word is a plural...
to show that there is more than one...
It is written, ''shots''...sans ap-os-tro-phe...
for plural add ...S... it's more fun...
it's in stanza one on line two...
you have made ''shot's'' a possessive...
and that, my friend, is a Boo Boo...
Properly written the word is a plural...
to show that there is more than one...
It is written, ''shots''...sans ap-os-tro-phe...
for plural add ...S... it's more fun...
Published 10th Mar 2019
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Fondly dedicated to David Macleod...
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