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A home
Painting perfect pictures
with words
so full of wonder and woe..
Your lovely lessons and
exquisite expressions of emotions
so help me to grow..
I just want you to know
that this wonderful place
within my screen
is always where I
long to be..
Hope you all can see
you make me want to be
a much better version of me..
Hope you all can see
you're such special beings
so full of beauty, with your
radiating rays of ravishing energy..
Each of you
so unique..
Each masterpiece you share
leaves me speechless and I can only stare..
I sit here spellbound..
A home I'm so lucky to have found.
This is where I live now..
my soul resides here
in the deep underground.
with words
so full of wonder and woe..
Your lovely lessons and
exquisite expressions of emotions
so help me to grow..
I just want you to know
that this wonderful place
within my screen
is always where I
long to be..
Hope you all can see
you make me want to be
a much better version of me..
Hope you all can see
you're such special beings
so full of beauty, with your
radiating rays of ravishing energy..
Each of you
so unique..
Each masterpiece you share
leaves me speechless and I can only stare..
I sit here spellbound..
A home I'm so lucky to have found.
This is where I live now..
my soul resides here
in the deep underground.
Author's Note
Lil DU appreciation post
Love you all!
You're all so damn talented!
My mind stays blown reading these
phenomenal pieces wish I could read them all!
Hope you all have a wonderful day!❤
Love you all!
You're all so damn talented!
My mind stays blown reading these
phenomenal pieces wish I could read them all!
Hope you all have a wonderful day!❤
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Re. A home
6th Mar 2019 6:38pm
Re: Re. A home
6th Mar 2019 10:21pm
Re. A home
Anonymous
6th Mar 2019 6:51pm
Beautiful...I think you've just spoken for many of us with your words here.

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Re. A home
Anonymous
6th Mar 2019 7:19pm
Your are a very talented young man. The appreciation is mutual. Keep on following your heart. It will take you a lifetime journey of discovery. Hugs J

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Re. A home
6th Mar 2019 7:55pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
6th Mar 2019 11:25pm
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Re: Re. A home
7th Mar 2019 9:14pm
Ill have to check that out!
Thanks for reading🙏
Very much appreciate your wonderfully kind comment Bender!
I do see myself in the crowd and do feel i belong
I'm Just not on the same level as all these phenomenal poets/poetesses which includes you
Very much appreciate your kindness🙏
Thanks for reading🙏
Very much appreciate your wonderfully kind comment Bender!
I do see myself in the crowd and do feel i belong
I'm Just not on the same level as all these phenomenal poets/poetesses which includes you
Very much appreciate your kindness🙏
Re: Re. A home
7th Mar 2019 9:25pm
Re. A home
7th Mar 2019 2:45am
Nothing like a productive poet
makes for a happy camper...
peace...love...an icy beer...
and Sonora-style fish tacos...Ely
makes for a happy camper...
peace...love...an icy beer...
and Sonora-style fish tacos...Ely
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Re: Re. A home
7th Mar 2019 9:28pm
Re. A home
7th Mar 2019 3:07am
Ain't we all like that? Reading the poems silently & admiring the talent. Getting inspiration to start a new piece.
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Re: Re. A home
7th Mar 2019 9:32pm
Absolutely! That's all i do lol and there's sooooooo many talented souls here it's amazing
Thanks for reading!🙏
Thanks for reading!🙏
Re. A home
7th Mar 2019 3:16am
This is truly a lovely poem and like the saying goes, "home is truly where the heart is"!!! Thanks to this nice ode to all of us at DUP as well.
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Re: Re. A home
7th Mar 2019 9:47pm
Thanks so much Librasoul!🙏
Definitely a home!
Appreciate you taking time to read!
Definitely a home!
Appreciate you taking time to read!