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A GENUINE UNHAPPINESS
Everyone with their sewn smiles
At least some can say theirs is unfeigned
I may not have the perfect life
As which to make for me
All of my days
The weight of despair keeps me in the darkest room
Leaving no room for escape
The rest of the world is so jovial it makes me sick!
They do no know gloom
Their happiness blinds them
At least some can say theirs is unfeigned
I may not have the perfect life
As which to make for me
All of my days
The weight of despair keeps me in the darkest room
Leaving no room for escape
The rest of the world is so jovial it makes me sick!
They do no know gloom
Their happiness blinds them
Published 1st Mar 2019
Author's Note
Inspired from my own depression issues
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Anonymous
1st Mar 2019 9:42pm
Linda,
Wow, that's powerful, especially since I know exactly how you feel.
Sorry about your depression issues. Life is not a good thing sometimes(most of the time. lol).
Hope you're feeling better soon,
Matthew.
Wow, that's powerful, especially since I know exactly how you feel.
Sorry about your depression issues. Life is not a good thing sometimes(most of the time. lol).
Hope you're feeling better soon,
Matthew.
1st Mar 2019 9:53pm
Anonymous
1st Mar 2019 10:17pm
You're welcome.
Keep writing, Linda, it helps a little sometimes, I guess.
Matthew.
Keep writing, Linda, it helps a little sometimes, I guess.
Matthew.
If their happiness blinds them, then they too are not genuinely happy; it suggests a facade.
There's nothing wrong, however, in feeling or being happy. Take it when & where you can girl!
I say that hoping & wishing it's more of the time. :-)
There's nothing wrong, however, in feeling or being happy. Take it when & where you can girl!
I say that hoping & wishing it's more of the time. :-)
2nd Mar 2019 8:56am
Thanks so much for the feedback. I surely appreciate it....by saying their happiness blinds them, I was trying to get at the fact when people are happy about every aspect of their like having a companion, buying a house, etc things are coming together for them they've got it all so yea they are gonna be all happy, but from my experience...those people have no empathy or don't really understand what it's like for those of us who don't seem to have it all...ya know what I mean ?
2nd Mar 2019 3:02pm
Yeah, they don't know what it's like & neither do they care, lol. Their attitude is, 'I'm alright Jack, sod you!.'
