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Miss Violin
this beautiful woman i see in my head
closing my eyes as i lie in bed
radiating a chilling breeze
nearly seeming like she might freeze
creating wind for the lust
her short white dress rises with gusts
as i view her from my sandbox pulling images ashore
the lights and colors begin to allure
while water ripples beneath her feet
the sound of her violin flows through the air
swirling out hypnotic colors of purple, green and blue
creating the perfect hue
her world is cosmic
erotic and wonderfully chaotic
my days feel eternally mundane
each one struggling to remain sane
but the lady in my head
supplies music for my soul
filling what once was dead
an endless black hole
seeing her snow white hair
i become affixed to a stare
like fire in winter
so hot, yet so cold
she rosins her bow
and continues to play nice and slow
a perfect reflection she casts
as she stands to play
casting darkness away
back into the fray
all my visions portrayed
as i drift away
Published 28th Feb 2019
| Edited 1st Mar 2019
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28th Feb 2019 7:51am
Perfect imagery. I could see her and the atmosphere in my mind and see and smell what you were describing...so beautiful...I love it!
1st Mar 2019 4:07am
Thanks! I tried to close my eyes as I wrote the draft out. I've always felt I wasn't the greatest at visual poetry, but I really felt like I could click with this one. If you ever want practice with a predetermined idea, the place to go is the competition section!
1st Mar 2019 5:32am
Oh is that right? Coo...I haven't really explored any of the other areas on this site yet. I will eventually go do that. Thanks
