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Of Men and Metaphors
There are no descriptors
I could compare thee to:
no metaphor or simile
Some see you as shade—
mountainous movement
of shifting personality;
a constant, ever-changeling state
canvasing darkness from light
Others pine for your passion
to entwine with their own—
a dreamscape:
granting childhood wishes truth;
a verification real intimacy exists
I see no comparison befitting
the caliber of a man's heart
It would only be a fraction
of your life, should I write
“You are like a Rothschild’s Orchid;
the rarest in the world."
Because orchids are not strong, nor warm;
but, possess a coldness to the touch
Their beauty does not swathe the stars
nor fold first-light with their arms.
I shall not wake encased by soft petals
of pink and purple, nor be quenched
under white and yellow-ringed crest
There is no metaphor
which grants you justice;
there is only this truth:
You walk proudly, a man aware
of his worth despite circumstance;
you eschew temptation for loyalty—
vehemently defending what you love
Tell me, my Dearest Darling—
what more is there to want
in this miniscule Universe of Us
~
I could compare thee to:
no metaphor or simile
Some see you as shade—
mountainous movement
of shifting personality;
a constant, ever-changeling state
canvasing darkness from light
Others pine for your passion
to entwine with their own—
a dreamscape:
granting childhood wishes truth;
a verification real intimacy exists
I see no comparison befitting
the caliber of a man's heart
It would only be a fraction
of your life, should I write
“You are like a Rothschild’s Orchid;
the rarest in the world."
Because orchids are not strong, nor warm;
but, possess a coldness to the touch
Their beauty does not swathe the stars
nor fold first-light with their arms.
I shall not wake encased by soft petals
of pink and purple, nor be quenched
under white and yellow-ringed crest
There is no metaphor
which grants you justice;
there is only this truth:
You walk proudly, a man aware
of his worth despite circumstance;
you eschew temptation for loyalty—
vehemently defending what you love
Tell me, my Dearest Darling—
what more is there to want
in this miniscule Universe of Us
~
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