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Waterfall Love
i am water!
explicit
refreshing
cool
. . .fall with me ----
Draw me, i will touch
Draw me, ‘tis your choice
O bring me close to your heart
i will covet & rejoice!
Dive into me during melting snows
Let me hear freshened screams
clear concise cleansing voice.
Allow me to love, to share
drenched in liquefied wonder
wonders to wander to care
a cause entrenched to
ponder.
Enveloped in empirical love
amidst the liquid song
of whales
awakening all your senses
a universal, synchronous
trail.
i am water
i am falling (for You)
melting into an ocean
to quench your thirst
for. . .
the best
may yet come. . .
wet.
explicit
refreshing
cool
. . .fall with me ----
Draw me, i will touch
Draw me, ‘tis your choice
O bring me close to your heart
i will covet & rejoice!
Dive into me during melting snows
Let me hear freshened screams
clear concise cleansing voice.
Allow me to love, to share
drenched in liquefied wonder
wonders to wander to care
a cause entrenched to
ponder.
Enveloped in empirical love
amidst the liquid song
of whales
awakening all your senses
a universal, synchronous
trail.
i am water
i am falling (for You)
melting into an ocean
to quench your thirst
for. . .
the best
may yet come. . .
wet.
Published 20th Jan 2019
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20th Jan 2019 3:03pm
20th Jan 2019 3:05pm
20th Jan 2019 3:17pm
Water pure and sweet is an endangered treat.
Thank you for reminding us of how precious it is. ☔
Thank you for reminding us of how precious it is. ☔
20th Jan 2019 3:21pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
20th Jan 2019 3:43pm
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20th Jan 2019 4:25pm
I've only seen whales (Grays) from San Diego, CA, shores when they were migrating north from Mexican waters. Happy to conjure the memory of orcas for You.
Thank You for the wonderful share and honor for the RL add
Thank You for the wonderful share and honor for the RL add
Anonymous
21st Jan 2019 1:57am
Tallen,
Fantastic write/ spill(water), my friend. Really beautiful.
MZ.
Fantastic write/ spill(water), my friend. Really beautiful.
MZ.
21st Jan 2019 2:55am
spill <<---- aaah, I see what You did - lol
appreciate You always, Brother
thank You for the high praise
appreciate You always, Brother
thank You for the high praise
21st Jan 2019 4:18pm
This was so poignant and I enjoyed the story you told. It was so beautiful....xo
21st Jan 2019 5:07pm
Anonymous
21st Jan 2019 7:11pm
A beautiful write about a love ever flowing. Simply adored it.
21st Jan 2019 7:12pm
23rd Jan 2019 4:47pm
this is so instinctual, just sensually gorgeous, Tallen
..no words..
greatly written
..no words..
greatly written
23rd Jan 2019 5:03pm
spilling about nature and elements
is
easy for me.
I've always been very observant when I backpack for months or a day.
appreciate the wonderful praise
is
easy for me.
I've always been very observant when I backpack for months or a day.
appreciate the wonderful praise
