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heroin
Hug me for the last time
for this night,
i'd become a human by tomorrow
if you leave me, or i'd do.
Grab me to yourself and weave
your arm around me, i want
this last night.
Hug me for the last time
for this night,
beautiful green winged angel,
i am painting to romantic your body
by a flame of a lighter,
like a candle, glowing, indside me,
would be my last memory...
for this night,
i'd become a human by tomorrow
if you leave me, or i'd do.
Grab me to yourself and weave
your arm around me, i want
this last night.
Hug me for the last time
for this night,
beautiful green winged angel,
i am painting to romantic your body
by a flame of a lighter,
like a candle, glowing, indside me,
would be my last memory...
Published 6th Jan 2019
Author's Note
It's a translation (of my poem). If You could or would help me to improve it, leave a comment (warmly welcome any suggestion) or send a message. I appreciate any remark. Thanks for Your time!
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
7th Jan 2019 7:43am
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7th Jan 2019 9:21am
Yes! Thanks! You gave me some new ideas.
I'm glad that You found some likeable stuff in my poem ((:
It's written in hungarian.
I'm glad that You found some likeable stuff in my poem ((:
It's written in hungarian.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
7th Jan 2019 9:26am
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7th Jan 2019 9:36am
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
7th Jan 2019 10:07am
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7th Jan 2019 11:49am
i am not good at speaking, anyway, thanks for Your interest. (:
however, i tried it to reading out loud.
however, i tried it to reading out loud.
