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the times of long shadows and dread
the times
of long shadows and dread
long gone
honey
i have drowned 'em
over the horizon
alongside yesterday's sunset
you did not hear the mute
his infrasonic squeals
nor when
his eyes roared the oceans to shame
the times of long shadows
and desert dust
and the occasional
wind gust...
of long shadows and dread
long gone
honey
i have drowned 'em
over the horizon
alongside yesterday's sunset
you did not hear the mute
his infrasonic squeals
nor when
his eyes roared the oceans to shame
the times of long shadows
and desert dust
and the occasional
wind gust...
Published 3rd Jan 2019
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3rd Jan 2019 7:05pm
"his eyes roared the oceans to shame" ... exquisite ... just exquisite ... bravo my poet ...
4th Jan 2019 6:39pm
Yes, those times are best cast to the past and left undisturbed.
Sounds as though a much calmer place in which to dwell has been found.
and I wish nothing but gentle ocean breezes and the warmth of sunny days ahead.
Sounds as though a much calmer place in which to dwell has been found.
and I wish nothing but gentle ocean breezes and the warmth of sunny days ahead.
Anonymous
4th Jan 2019 7:37pm
Hey Cold One,
That is really a nice piece of writing.
Deep, and dark, and mysterious.
Great job, my friend.
MZ.
That is really a nice piece of writing.
Deep, and dark, and mysterious.
Great job, my friend.
MZ.
5th Jan 2019 4:31am
your amassed heaviness in such few words...there is an uneasy silence taking in..that still yearns & feels the chaos the love the trouble that all soul is worth for..in such a deliberate difficult burial..only to emerge? that is what is the hope the faith this flower of storm speaks n scripts...whatever shrink n shedded deaths the gripping winds would want.. #juzme frm ur soothing melancholy a beauty u load in the verses... heartfelt
write on..
write on..
Anonymous
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5th Jan 2019 12:24pm
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8th Jan 2019 3:13am
the portion below cause an infestation which feasted upon my emotions ...
"honey
i have drowned 'em
over the horizon
alongside yesterday's sunset
you did not hear the mute
his infrasonic squeals
nor when
his eyes roared the oceans to shame "
*don't you ever dare stop writing..
"honey
i have drowned 'em
over the horizon
alongside yesterday's sunset
you did not hear the mute
his infrasonic squeals
nor when
his eyes roared the oceans to shame "
*don't you ever dare stop writing..
