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Wicked Velvet
Wicked Velvet,
Commits all manner of sin
Heedless of the bind
She puts me in!
She gets away with whatever
She wants
For her, there is no real
Consequence
She never seeks the
Authentic truth
Spins tales without a
Shred of proof!
Fantastically naughty,
Sexy, and hot
Is she here to
Seduce you, or not?
She’s Pro-Sex, not a
Prude Radical Fem
And yet no pornographer,
Like some of them!
If I had a crystal ball,
It might become clear
On what wild journeys
She will take me next year!
...
Commits all manner of sin
Heedless of the bind
She puts me in!
She gets away with whatever
She wants
For her, there is no real
Consequence
She never seeks the
Authentic truth
Spins tales without a
Shred of proof!
Fantastically naughty,
Sexy, and hot
Is she here to
Seduce you, or not?
She’s Pro-Sex, not a
Prude Radical Fem
And yet no pornographer,
Like some of them!
If I had a crystal ball,
It might become clear
On what wild journeys
She will take me next year!
...
Published 28th Dec 2018
| Edited 1st Jan 2019
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28th Dec 2018 6:30am
28th Dec 2018 6:51am
Thank you RJM, I’m so grateful for your encouragement over these past few months! You have been a great mentor and friend to me :)
28th Dec 2018 7:22am
I don't know about mentor 😊, but it has always been a pleasure to read your work and to watch you develop as a writer. Keep up the good work 😁.
Rob
Rob
Anonymous
28th Dec 2018 6:50am
Velvet,
How cool are you??
Fun, sexy, sweet. Perfect.
Nice write, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
How cool are you??
Fun, sexy, sweet. Perfect.
Nice write, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
28th Dec 2018 6:52am
Anonymous
28th Dec 2018 5:54pm
You're welcome, Beautiful One.
Maybe you should re-name the poem Wicked Cool Velvet.
(Note: if you need someone to be your Poem Title Management Coordinator(PTMC), let me know. I'm not expensive, just $630,038.00 a year. and 6 weeks vacation. Thanks...can I take a week now? I'm tired from that title change. Thanks).
Love,
Matthew.
Maybe you should re-name the poem Wicked Cool Velvet.
(Note: if you need someone to be your Poem Title Management Coordinator(PTMC), let me know. I'm not expensive, just $630,038.00 a year. and 6 weeks vacation. Thanks...can I take a week now? I'm tired from that title change. Thanks).
Love,
Matthew.
28th Dec 2018 10:57pm
I believe I’m in need of a Poem Title Management Coordinator! Do you accept IOU? Love, V
Anonymous
28th Dec 2018 11:05pm
LOL! Absolutely! I would accept wooden nickels from you. Or just a hello, that would still be an overpayment.
Love,
Matthew.
Love,
Matthew.
28th Dec 2018 7:57am
Anonymous
28th Dec 2018 8:39am
This reads as a lyrical abandonment to your inner self. Think we are all at mercy of certain cartesian dualism. Wilde knew. Enjoyable read.
28th Dec 2018 9:39am
28th Dec 2018 11:16pm
You may be wicked but a helluva writer. Very seductive lines. Can't wait to see what you come up with in the coming year!
28th Dec 2018 11:56pm
5th Feb 2019 12:48pm
*high five* we need to go take shots Poetess! Somehow I know we would have lots of fun and get ourselves in loads of trouble! As always Brilliant spill!
9th Jun 2019 4:48am
