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Eleven (written for remembrance day)
The 11th hour
the 11th day
the 11th month
remembrance day:
put your guns
to the ground
hear the cheering
and look around
there's no more pain
no more lives are taken
open your heart
and peace shall awaken
to end all wars
we thank the brave men
who went out to fight
so we can be free again
families can be reunited
or are resting in heaven
we'll never forget
the number eleven
wear your poppy
as it's respect that you pay
we'll never forget
remembrance day
the 11th day
the 11th month
remembrance day:
put your guns
to the ground
hear the cheering
and look around
there's no more pain
no more lives are taken
open your heart
and peace shall awaken
to end all wars
we thank the brave men
who went out to fight
so we can be free again
families can be reunited
or are resting in heaven
we'll never forget
the number eleven
wear your poppy
as it's respect that you pay
we'll never forget
remembrance day
Published 10th Nov 2011
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2011 9:17am
Its just a lovely dedication tripple six.
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13th Nov 2011 8:43pm
I have served , I did 12 years. Got out as a Sargent. 1/75th Rangers. I was an AFO. I have taken lives but I will never forget their names. Thank you for keeping us with you. For when we are over there all we thought about was you.
17th May 2014 8:24pm
Very genuine dedication. If u have to explain it then its really not worth its weight in words... lots of reaching for rhyme but still the emotion was there. Keep grindin
