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Illusions of the heart
illusion of the heart
A pretty little thing don't you think
Turn it up side down an see how it can make you
bleed
You think it has 2 beautiful rounded curves what an
illusion
There is one part that is sharper than a two edged
blade
Be careful for wen that pretty little heart turns on
you
It will cut your insides up and rip through your spirit
like a hot knife through butter
That pretty little heart will leave you with a dark
empty space
Lets full up the emptiness with a beautiful colorful
rainbow that will only make you smile again
Let go of that little pretty illusion of a heart it will be
the death of you
A pretty little thing don't you think
Turn it up side down an see how it can make you
bleed
You think it has 2 beautiful rounded curves what an
illusion
There is one part that is sharper than a two edged
blade
Be careful for wen that pretty little heart turns on
you
It will cut your insides up and rip through your spirit
like a hot knife through butter
That pretty little heart will leave you with a dark
empty space
Lets full up the emptiness with a beautiful colorful
rainbow that will only make you smile again
Let go of that little pretty illusion of a heart it will be
the death of you
Published 29th Nov 2018
| Edited 30th Nov 2018
Author's Note
My inspiration is the heart and spirit of every living thing that goes through heartache.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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29th Nov 2018 8:37pm
This likeable read would be better receptive
if You included stanza spacing.
Maybe even some line spacing (breaths - as I call 'em)
Other than that,
a nice read.
if You included stanza spacing.
Maybe even some line spacing (breaths - as I call 'em)
Other than that,
a nice read.
30th Nov 2018 12:51pm
I have to agree with Tallen. Other then that it is a great piece. It expresses feelings many of us have experienced and serves somewhat as a warning.
Really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.
Really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.
30th Nov 2018 6:31pm
30th Nov 2018 6:45pm
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Dec 2018 1:45pm
18th Dec 2018 11:49pm
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