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The Mercurial
was he really that complicated or
was he confused she mused
why would he refuse to just choose
make a choice
was he too afraid to lose?
was this all just a ruse?
well time is running short
and she's starting to feel a bit used
how many times did he bruise her ego
left her alone at night with
a heavy heart singing the blues
only to excuse his behavior
the very next day
in favor of her love for him
and the way he makes her ooze
constantly hitting that reset button
putting her intuition on snooze
secretly fretting she may
be regretting this in the future
letting time tell the tale
as she puts her soul on cruise control
and continued to inhale his
murky hues of love
was he confused she mused
why would he refuse to just choose
make a choice
was he too afraid to lose?
was this all just a ruse?
well time is running short
and she's starting to feel a bit used
how many times did he bruise her ego
left her alone at night with
a heavy heart singing the blues
only to excuse his behavior
the very next day
in favor of her love for him
and the way he makes her ooze
constantly hitting that reset button
putting her intuition on snooze
secretly fretting she may
be regretting this in the future
letting time tell the tale
as she puts her soul on cruise control
and continued to inhale his
murky hues of love
Published 18th Nov 2018
| Edited 4th Jan 2019
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18th Nov 2018 1:10am
left her alone at night with
a heavy heart singing the blues
only to excuse his behavior
the very next day
in favor of her love for him
love is a very complicated thing. I have been "her" before. Shit I kidding I am HER now!! Excellent insight!
a heavy heart singing the blues
only to excuse his behavior
the very next day
in favor of her love for him
love is a very complicated thing. I have been "her" before. Shit I kidding I am HER now!! Excellent insight!
Anonymous
18th Nov 2018 4:24am
Whoa Naajir......I feel every word of this right thru my heart and soul......all most as of you’ve read my emotions.......great emotional ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
18th Nov 2018 5:36am
sometimes it's okay to let yourself be torn apart :)
