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THE PRELUDE
You thirsted
And we danced for rain
It came
And it refreshed us
So we danced for rain
Again
(To think
That was merely
The prelude
Our storming bodies
Had a lot of ground
To cover that night)
And we danced for rain
It came
And it refreshed us
So we danced for rain
Again
(To think
That was merely
The prelude
Our storming bodies
Had a lot of ground
To cover that night)
Published 5th Nov 2018
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5th Nov 2018 9:40pm
Storming bodies; new combination of words rarely seen. Nice piece overall, as well. Liked
5th Nov 2018 9:47pm
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9th Nov 2018 5:20pm
u distinctly have a meditatively
sexy mind
dew drops come often
then it rains
again and again
the night is long
why let it last in vain
let's do it again
as it does rain
nice sexy eroticey
inside thru out it rains
sexy mind
dew drops come often
then it rains
again and again
the night is long
why let it last in vain
let's do it again
as it does rain
nice sexy eroticey
inside thru out it rains
