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NOTHING
In her dreams
She can walk
The length of the universe
It is nothing
So yes
It is easy enough
To bring us together
She can walk
The length of the universe
It is nothing
So yes
It is easy enough
To bring us together
Published 5th Nov 2018
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For Picture Holds a Thousand Words #3 comp
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5th Nov 2018 9:42pm
That's one hell of a visual. I had to think on it so it works as a critical read as well. Not enough poetry out there like this; if you ask me.
5th Nov 2018 9:50pm
5th Nov 2018 9:51pm
5th Nov 2018 10:43pm
I completely agree with Nari. Your poem is short, but straight to the point and very thought-provocative. You make the things seem easy to complete, which in reality they are, it's just we like to complicate things. I enjoyed reading your poem, and I thank you for participating in my competition.
5th Nov 2018 10:47pm
5th Nov 2018 10:49pm
