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PB&J
He grips the lid
with his tender yet firm hand
bicep bulging
as he applies pressure
a barely perceptible grunt
escapes his lips
as the jar opens
releasing a heady aroma
of succulent peanuts
Playfully he plunges a finger
in to break the surface
it seems to be sucked deeper
pulling out the now
coated appendage
savoring the taste
as he licks it clean
with his knife
he covers every inch
of the bread’s surface
with the smooth spread
not bothering first
to clean his tool
similarly he applies
strawberry jam
to another slice
the sweet, sticky juices
saturate every wheaty pore
She steals away his utensil
and seductively
licks his glistening
blade clean
moaning as she enjoys
every sweet and salty
creamy tongue full
they hungrily kiss
the final step in their
lunchtime ritual
with his tender yet firm hand
bicep bulging
as he applies pressure
a barely perceptible grunt
escapes his lips
as the jar opens
releasing a heady aroma
of succulent peanuts
Playfully he plunges a finger
in to break the surface
it seems to be sucked deeper
pulling out the now
coated appendage
savoring the taste
as he licks it clean
with his knife
he covers every inch
of the bread’s surface
with the smooth spread
not bothering first
to clean his tool
similarly he applies
strawberry jam
to another slice
the sweet, sticky juices
saturate every wheaty pore
She steals away his utensil
and seductively
licks his glistening
blade clean
moaning as she enjoys
every sweet and salty
creamy tongue full
they hungrily kiss
the final step in their
lunchtime ritual
Published 27th Oct 2018
Author's Note
2013 was a damn fine year for my writing. This is another that I wrote in November of that year. May that inspiration come again.
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27th Oct 2018 2:00am
This is such a beautiful poem...Who would ever thought PB&J could be an erotic thought, very nicely stated
27th Oct 2018 2:12am
Thank you so much Kitty! It was fun to write. I appreciate your words of encouragement. The true test...did you prepare a sandwich after reading :)
27th Oct 2018 3:13am
Well, I'm certainly glad you spread such sexy thoughts on wheat bread, for had you used white bread, it would have been a real buzz kill for me. :-))
Enjoyed this this foray into your mind, my friend.
Good Luck in the comp, Bob
Enjoyed this this foray into your mind, my friend.
Good Luck in the comp, Bob
27th Oct 2018 4:57am
Thank you so much, Teri. I had to be somewhat sensible and get my fiber. A foray into my mind would be a "long strange trip" indeed.
Anonymous
27th Oct 2018 2:11pm
Very nice GW. I love peanut butter and jelly too. If it's a bit naughty, it's even better. Good ink my friend. J
28th Oct 2018 9:22pm
Thank you Juvenalis! Brings to meaning to playing with ones food. I am glad you like the piece.
27th Oct 2018 7:29pm
28th Oct 2018 9:19pm
Thank you Jemac! It was indeed enjoyable to write. I am pleased you like the piece.
27th Oct 2018 7:43pm
I wish I had someone around to make himself a pb&j sandwich. Who knew it could be so damn sexy..thanks to you it now is!
28th Oct 2018 9:17pm
Leave it to me to make the mundanist if things sexy. Happy sandwhich making! I appreciate your gift as well.
27th Oct 2018 9:59pm
I love the idea of food as foreplay. You take us to the tasty brink, and leave much to the imagination. An excellent write.
28th Oct 2018 9:13pm
28th Oct 2018 8:13pm
Hmmm ... makes me ... hunger ... great sensual experience with this my sweet poet ...
28th Oct 2018 9:12pm
Thank you Soledad! It's my peanutty "Like Water for Chocolate. " I appreciate, always, your comments.
Anonymous
28th Oct 2018 9:16pm
Can think of worse ways of fulfilling the need for that fibre - enough sugar in this to perk me up lol.
Enjoyed this Bob :)
Enjoyed this Bob :)
29th Oct 2018 5:28am
Yes ma'am 😁 Have I made fiber sensual? I should get an award of some sort. I am diuble enthused that yiu liked this piece.
