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A Wondering Mind
[font=Courier New]A wondering mind steps onto the train of thought.
Not knowing were to go, it just enjoys the ride.
The different places and different things it sees, on the train the wondering mind stays, doesn't want to leave.
How long does the train go on? Will it stop or take a rest?
The wondering mind does not know, it just keeps going with the flow.
It meets other minds and is offered to ride the train of relief, the train of satisfaction, the train of idleness, but on the train of thought it stays.
A wondering mind that sometimes wonders to much, sometimes it hesitates, and sometimes it strays to far.
The wondering mind likes the train of thought, it's feel, it's comfortability, it's relaxation, its not knowing when or where it will end.
Or maybe its just the feeling of understanding.
Who really understands the wondering mind besides it's train of thought?
Who really wonders the same way of the wondering mind?
Who would be bold enough to step onto that train of thought as the wondering mind, not knowing when the ride will end?
Loyal to its train, the wondering mind stays, site seeing, and waiting for the ride to end, that is, if it ends... [/font]
Not knowing were to go, it just enjoys the ride.
The different places and different things it sees, on the train the wondering mind stays, doesn't want to leave.
How long does the train go on? Will it stop or take a rest?
The wondering mind does not know, it just keeps going with the flow.
It meets other minds and is offered to ride the train of relief, the train of satisfaction, the train of idleness, but on the train of thought it stays.
A wondering mind that sometimes wonders to much, sometimes it hesitates, and sometimes it strays to far.
The wondering mind likes the train of thought, it's feel, it's comfortability, it's relaxation, its not knowing when or where it will end.
Or maybe its just the feeling of understanding.
Who really understands the wondering mind besides it's train of thought?
Who really wonders the same way of the wondering mind?
Who would be bold enough to step onto that train of thought as the wondering mind, not knowing when the ride will end?
Loyal to its train, the wondering mind stays, site seeing, and waiting for the ride to end, that is, if it ends... [/font]
Published 4th Nov 2011
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2012 10:49am
Yes, the train of thought, you have cleverly written about the many stages of thought and emotion....Guess we all take this train.
Well done!
Well done!
