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Grindcore eyeliner
Black fishnets called you a pussy,
spit in my face;
call it Love.
bask
in desperation
as oxygen.
spit in my face;
call it Love.
bask
in desperation
as oxygen.
Published 17th Oct 2018
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17th Oct 2018 10:59pm
Anonymous
17th Oct 2018 11:29pm
Every now and then I’ll read a title and go, man I wish I’d thought of that.
The spacing in this actually tells the real story. As if each line is an individual thought. A pause in a timeline of razor sharp events.
Really loved this. Thank you for sharing.
-M
The spacing in this actually tells the real story. As if each line is an individual thought. A pause in a timeline of razor sharp events.
Really loved this. Thank you for sharing.
-M
18th Oct 2018 2:18am
19th Oct 2018 10:35pm
Great structure to this ... the pattern of line breaks works so well with this one ...
